From our audience feedback we began editing our final magazine advert. One of the main suggestions to change about the advert was the typography. We felt our original choice of text was poor as it had mostly recieved negative feedback from our audience on both our magazine advert and digipak therfore after completing our focus group based on the texts we decided on a text as a group that our audience liked and that we felt fit our genre Indie-Pop. We decided to keep the text colour in white and the size and positioning the same as positioning fit with the line of vision and the colour help connote purity which we felt added effect as it contrasts with the image on the right. We also decided to add more promotional language through adding a star review from a magazine. This will help show the artist as established and professional. It will also attract more of an audience as the performer will be represented as successful. Overall i feel our magazine advert fits the Indie-Pop genre while challenging it by portraying a message.